Scarlett is our computer 'Paint' expert in Room 7. She created this story on PowerPoint, making all of the illustrations herself using the Paint program on the computer. Well done Scarlett we love reading your story and looking at your amazing artwork!
Tuesday, 22 October 2013
My Wild Self
We are learning to use juicy describing words in our writing. We made our own wild selves and wrote about them using lots of great adjectives. Look at our great writing below:
This is my wild self. I
think I look so pretty and I have a cool t-shirt with love hearts. I love my
wild self. I have two ostrich feet.
-
Scarlett
This is my wild self
and I have beautiful light orange butterfly wings. For my ears I have warm
fluffy polar bear ears. On top of my head I have long nice feathers. I have
lots of other cool heathers around myself. I love my wild self! The background
looks like a zoo because it is a zoo and a beautiful butterfly!
-
Afrina
This is my wild self. I
have a lightning t-shirt. I have bat wings and awesome glasses. I have cool
yellow shoes and so cool black pants.
-
Tanner
This is my wild self. I
have sticky frog arms. I have spider legs and a stingray top. I have a piece of
lightning on my t-shirt.
-
Shaun
If you have a smartphone you can scan these QR codes to read our stories online.
Lucia's Wild Self Zeyad's Wild Self
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